BETA NEEDED PRONTO, PLZ

[jedibuttercup]

*bursting into tears*

It's done. It's done! 3,900 words representing the next (but not, alas, the last) chapter of backagainharry. You have no idea how many times I've rewritten this segment; I knew how it had to start, and how it had to end, but trying to keep the character voices in character--!!! (I'm quite out of love with Remus Lupin now).

I swore off LiveJournal until I got it done, but now it is, nearly a month after I promised it, so--

Anyone want to read it over for me, give critical commentary? I fear I've lost all perspective after this much editing. (Just drop me a comment, and I'll send you the sekrit link).

Thank you. Much love and apologies!
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Comments

[beatrice_otter]

Woohoo! I'd love to help, but alas most of my HP knowledge comes from fanfic and the rest comes from the movies, so if you're looking for feedback other than squee I can't help. (I read the Sorceror's Stone, once; I think I read parts of a couple of the others in the series.)

We've missed you; it's good to have you back.