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> Mal deciding what to wear - *loves Mal* I can just picture him doing this. And it's so Mal.

Yeah, when I wrote this I was thinking about that cute moment of self-consciousness in "Our Mrs. Reynolds", when he's talking to Saffron, and is all concerned about -- "Is there blubber?" Hee.

> The conversation at breakfast with Simon and Kaylee - I just about died laughing!

I had a lot of fun putting that humorous moment into the story!

> River's Slayer comments - as I've said before, I can't wait to see where you take this storyline.

I hope it doesn't disappoint.

> Zoe - *hugs Zoe* and *hugs Mal for being so understanding* And once more the voices of the character is perfect, as is your narration.

Thank you. I really appreciate your comments!