jedibuttercup

It took me a couple days to find the time to re-skim the fic to answer your questions, sorry; that was what, the second Big Bang fic I ever wrote? :)

My favorite line(s) of dialogue? Hard to pick just one, so here's a few of them, by character:

Eliot: "We're brothers, not bookends!"
Hardison: "Apparently, shit went down while we were gone that did not make the papers."
Lindsey: "Forgive me if I don't put all my eggs in that basket full of if."
Nate: (regarding Lindsey's soul) "Then let us help you steal it back, so you can captain it as you see fit."
Parker: "Didn't you know? He's like Samson. His hair's the source of his strength! If you cut it off, we'll have to find a new hitter."

And as for different versions ... no, actually? I'm the type of longfic writer who has to begin at the beginning and write straight through to the end, no skipping around or writing alternate scenes. I usually have a plot skeleton laid out that I'm writing to, but the way I visualize as a I write, I kind of have to see it all building in my head to know exactly what the characters should do next.

(The only time I ever backtrack and write a different version is when I'm doing a multiple-POV story and I just can't make the next scene happen from the selected POV. So I either have to move the scene, or change characters, and in either case I usually delete-with-prejudice the parts that weren't working.)