jedibuttercup

Hakoda's reflection on his children as the future of the tribe is lovely, and I like that you juxtaposed that with Iroh thinking, Perhaps he had been wrong about Zuko's crossroads of destiny. Perhaps the crucial decision has yet to be made-- for the lessons Iroh taught him apparently remain, like embers burning in his shuttered heart.. Because suddenly you twisted the ash metsphor that Zuko used for his uncle's silence's effect on his heart. Instead of making something die, Iroh sees something struggling for life. And that's the difference between them that gets resolved. LOVELY.