Fic: Clearing the Air (Firefly, 1/?)

[jedibuttercup]

PG-15; Firefly crossover. Mal recieves a mysterious package, leading the crew of Serenity on a voyage of discovery. Into every generation...

(Book's Legacy 1: Clearing the Air)

As of October 17, 2006, this story has been rewritten, added to, and moved to a separate community. Link above goes to new location. Story index is here.

(Originally x-posted to joss100 and afterserenity)

Comments

[sappho-wilde.livejournal.com]

I enjoyed this quite a lot, too. The voices are seamless, and read all together it feels like an actual episode or movie. It's so easy to visualize Mal and Jayne talking, as you have them written.

One more to go! *smile*

Feedback

[jedibuttercup]

> I enjoyed this quite a lot, too. The voices are seamless, and read all together it feels like an actual episode or movie.

Thank you; I really appreciate the feedback. I try to 'watch' each chapter in my mind's eye as I write, picture the characters actually saying what I want them to, and edit accordingly. I hope you contine to enjoy future chapters!