Fic: Clearing the Air (Firefly, 1/?)

[jedibuttercup]

PG-15; Firefly crossover. Mal recieves a mysterious package, leading the crew of Serenity on a voyage of discovery. Into every generation...

(Book's Legacy 1: Clearing the Air)

As of October 17, 2006, this story has been rewritten, added to, and moved to a separate community. Link above goes to new location. Story index is here.

(Originally x-posted to joss100 and afterserenity)

Comments

[krypton288.livejournal.com]

Ooh, I like. Both Mal and Jayne felt in character and the situation was believable.
My only comment is that the exposition at the beginning felt out of place. However, if you're planning on turning these shorts into a something with a over reaching plot, then I get why you'd want/need it there.
All in all, quite an enjoyable read.

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[jedibuttercup]

> Ooh, I like. Both Mal and Jayne felt in character and the situation was believable.

That's good to hear, thanks. =)

> My only comment is that the exposition at the beginning felt out of place. However, if you're planning on turning these shorts into a something with a over reaching plot, then I get why you'd want/need it there.

Yep, this is going to be a series. Possibly quite a long one, given that I signed up to write 100 Mal-centric ficlets; the more of them I can chain onto the same plot (much of which I already have planned out), the better!

I hope you continue to enjoy future chapters.