Fic: An Uncluttered Sky (Firefly, Book's Legacy, 4/?)

[jedibuttercup]

PG-15; Firefly crossover. Mal recieves a mysterious package, leading the crew of Serenity on a voyage of discovery. Into every generation...

(Book's Legacy 4: An Uncluttered Sky)

As of October 17, 2006, this story has been rewritten, added to, and moved to a separate community. Link above goes to new location. Story index is here.

(Originally x-posted to joss100 and afterserenity)

Comments

[loriel-eris.livejournal.com]

*squee* This was absolutely delightful! All of it!

Mal deciding what to wear - *loves Mal* I can just picture him doing this. And it's so Mal.

The conversation at breakfast with Simon and Kaylee - I just about died laughing!

River's Slayer comments - as I've said before, I can't wait to see where you take this storyline.

Zoe - *hugs Zoe* and *hugs Mal for being so understanding*

And once more the voices of the character is perfect, as is your narration.

BL #5

[jedibuttercup]

> Mal deciding what to wear - *loves Mal* I can just picture him doing this. And it's so Mal.

Yeah, when I wrote this I was thinking about that cute moment of self-consciousness in "Our Mrs. Reynolds", when he's talking to Saffron, and is all concerned about -- "Is there blubber?" Hee.

> The conversation at breakfast with Simon and Kaylee - I just about died laughing!

I had a lot of fun putting that humorous moment into the story!

> River's Slayer comments - as I've said before, I can't wait to see where you take this storyline.

I hope it doesn't disappoint.

> Zoe - *hugs Zoe* and *hugs Mal for being so understanding* And once more the voices of the character is perfect, as is your narration.

Thank you. I really appreciate your comments!