> Ooh, I like. Both Mal and Jayne felt in character and the situation was believable.
That's good to hear, thanks. =)
> My only comment is that the exposition at the beginning felt out of place. However, if you're planning on turning these shorts into a something with a over reaching plot, then I get why you'd want/need it there.
Yep, this is going to be a series. Possibly quite a long one, given that I signed up to write 100 Mal-centric ficlets; the more of them I can chain onto the same plot (much of which I already have planned out), the better!
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That's good to hear, thanks. =)
> My only comment is that the exposition at the beginning felt out of place. However, if you're planning on turning these shorts into a something with a over reaching plot, then I get why you'd want/need it there.
Yep, this is going to be a series. Possibly quite a long one, given that I signed up to write 100 Mal-centric ficlets; the more of them I can chain onto the same plot (much of which I already have planned out), the better!
I hope you continue to enjoy future chapters.