> Glad I read it now, anyway...really excellent idea for the structure.

I was a little nervous about that, since it's not in any way a normal story format, but it just seemed so neatly symmetrical to me, a neat way to detail the growing depth of their interaction. I'm glad to hear it worked. =)

> I look forward to more stories with these two, if only because you make it work so well.

There will be more, never fear. I'll be watching upcoming episodes of CSI with pen in hand, looking for inspiration!