I'm thrilled to see another installment of this 'verse. I love the idea and really like Greg's interaction with Daniel. It's nice to see a thread of Greg's old enthusiasm peeking in here, especially since it seemed to disappear for a while on the show. And I love that he can throw Daniel with his questions, that there's a reason the SGC scouted him out and recruited him. I hope you'll continue this -- I'd love to see Greg on Atlantis or the CSI's reaction to him leaving.