I agree with the others, this Mia is kickass! Smart, confident, tough and assertive, rarr! I especially liked that you wrote her as observant enough to notice Brian's proclivities and smart enough to understand exactly what they mean, and not be threatened by it. Because she really does understand, and she knows that as much chemistry as Brian has with everyone, he also truly does love her. (And also that her brother is completely in denial, heh.)

Although now I'm curious about which 'testosterone posioned ex' of his she did meet. Mrr?

-- it wasn't as though she were a guy, and he could just unzip her and tell her to shake it out--

LOL, I see what you did there! XD