I've been waiting for an update for ages. Which is really the pot calling the kettle black, but whatever ;)

Anywho...very nice fix wonderfully interwoven into the original storyline. We get to keep Kim without losing any of the tension of having the AI version of her there. And of course there's the reveal concerning Dawn's origin. It's still not exact, considering what we know of Dawn's actual history, but it's closer and still a plausible origin considering who the ppl of Eureka are and what they know.