> If I had to criticize something, I'd say the chapter is a little too enumerative: Quidditch, then Astronomy, Herbology, History of magic, Charms...

I was a bit worried about that, but I was trying to parallel the way JKR did his first week of classes, and also highlight which classes he's not going to be focusing on much and where he's going to have problems!

Thanks for your comments, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!