Yet another well done chapter, love the way you describe the small events the Angel/Wesley/Connor kidnapping arc, such as Wesley's dealings with Justine in the search for Angel's coffin.

Your characterization of O'Neil is excellent, capturing his sense of humor, and his feelings towards Quinn joining the team. You are also spot on in regards to Wesley. You show amazing insight into his character during his decision making process about joining the SGC, and his assessment of the entire team, particularly that of Sam. With Sam, I'm wondering if I should be on the lookout for something in future chapters.